One dream at a time,
I walk holding hope’s hands
Faith in myself a little more today
I seek yet again strange lands.
Lands of the unknown
Where I seek the divine
Gushing out pure love
I faked smile of belief.
A smile – real or fake
Is all one needs sometime
To melt a road block
On the path to a better being.
Being which I lost
In the path of thorns
Hard rocks I still stumble
Wavering feets falter
And I wait for a glimpse.
A glimpse of the promised future
A blurred image of a dream
Let go once, held close today
A gift or a curse,who can say.
Cursed I have always been
When I didn’t believe
I knitted the scattered pieces
For I was walking again.
Walking again, holding hope’s hands
Walking straight into unknown lands
Fake smiles do not cause you harm
Head held high, i love the way I am.
I again Believed
I again Smiled
I again Loved
And I again Lived 🙂
P.S. I wrote this in collaboration with Lady Nimue (Her lines in red). Thanks a lot girl for inspiring me when I needed it. I loved composing this piece with you 🙂
Looved writing this one !! and so happy it turned out to be such a positive one .. Bet we both needed this creative session ..<3
No one can take away one's hope, love & belief other except oneself. life is always being more about running & struggling to be perfect for someone else and hence we forget to be ourselves. And time comes beckoning and finally we accept that there is no such thing as being perfection., A part of us growing as a person & accepting our past and our weaknesses and have faith and move on.And both of you are awesome 🙂
@ladynimue I so love the positivity that flows out of it ❤ Thanks to u sweetheart 🙂 I so needed it…We should do such sessions often 😀
@meethimirchi I soo LOVE ur comment and u spoke such truth in it…that i can say just yes to each line :)Glad u liked it 🙂 I think we three should write a piece together will be awesome 😀
I would be so looking forward to it , 🙂 InshaAllah someday for sure
@meethimirchi InshaAllah 🙂
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🙂 excellent happy poem loved it Bikram's
I am so happy to see the positive spirit in you SG! Live again, love again, laugh again…You go girl! Love you!! ❤ Hugs.
@Bikramjit Yes happy poem after long 😀
@Archie Awww 🙂 And I so so love ur comment..you are the best :)Love ya ❤ *Hugs*
thats the way,way to go girl,thought of re-living mesmerizes for sure
awwwwwww ❤ ❤ ❤ i got reminded of the good old days of WL… 🙂 🙂 🙂 loved the piece…. 🙂 🙂 I am reading something so positive after a long time….Its refreshing 🙂 🙂 It almost makes me wanna live again 🙂 😛
Nice poem , Dreams do give us something to think and forge us ahead to explore the untapped potential within @ times.Take care.KS
Awesome post! Good to see you back at blogging! 🙂
"Head held high I love the way I am" – oh Yeah! – women need tosay this more often.I also like the continuing threadof hope.
the flow is so good, it doesnt appear that two different people have penned the verses..yet wen i read ur PS i could see the differences too.all in all…nicely done..fresh and optimistic :))sarah
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and I loved it again
What a beautifully composed poem! Loved it! ❤
Nice..Positive and made me think..Loved it.
beautifully written. 🙂
I love this,I love how positive it starts as well as it ends, other than mine..This is beautiful.xo
Yayyyyyyyy.. Wow what a poem SG.. Superb.. ~ Happy Frendship Day ~Someone is Special
That's very admirable said ..:) Loves the stanzas…
S G, I find no words to say how both of you have said something so beautifully with such a hopeful ending. Take carePS : Left comment on previous one too.
@Sona YAY 🙂 yes the thought is mesmerizing but actually getting to relive is a tough task 🙂
@Shwe 😀 YES even i did something like this after ages :DI am glad u liked it and if u cd relive once again i will be happiest 😀
@Vivek Rightly said …thanks 🙂
lovely piece..u must always believe and have hope.. take care girl
you are a survivor.well done,
check out short story slam week 7 today.bless your writing, hope to see you in.:)
that's a beautiful poem. you have a promising talent. wish i could write as good as you 🙂
Aww this is awesome Masha'Allah <3<3 M following you . looking forward to read more stuff :)http://my-littlee-secrets.blogspot.com/ follow me too 😉
@Mehak thanks dear 🙂 Glad u liked it 🙂
@Bluebell Books thanks 🙂 Will surely check soon 🙂
@TheGirlAtFirstAvenue Thanks girl 🙂 good to be back 🙂
@Cynthia Yes Surely :DThanks a lot for liking 🙂
@subtlescribbler Well that was the beauty of writing it so thought flow and u gel into one :)Thanks 🙂
@Iqra I so missed ur updates…will check ur new link 🙂
@Manjari thanks 😀 and what a rapchik pen name 😀
@Komal thanks darling ❤
@Priya glad u liked it 🙂
@Ria thanks dear 🙂
@Some Kind of Courage thank u so much…that was what it was meant to be 🙂
@SIS yay thanks 🙂 Belated Happy Friendship day 🙂
@Being Pramoda thanks so much dear 🙂
@Jack Uncle Thank u so much Jack uncle and I loved the other comment of urs too 🙂
@Erisha Awww that was one comment that made my day and I love ur name…so beautiful 🙂
@Aman thank u sooo much 🙂
Beautifully crafted poem indeed, but Wavering "feets" falter?
This collaboration looks better than maruti-suzuki collaboration. Hope is the essence of existence. Nice.
Hows dat I have not been here…StAY blessed gal..you are life…